Mrs. Martin and I were really pleased with the way everyone applied themselves to the "Writing Conventions" activity. Given that we keep running into incomplete sentences, we thought it would be a good idea to provide you with some extra practice.
Please cut and paste the following list of incomplete sentences into a new post in your blog. You can call it "Making Full Sentences." Turn each incomplete sentence into a full sentence. Some sentences may be fine just as they are. If a sentence does not need to be fixed, just leave it as is. (You could put "Ok, as is" after it). Remember, a sentence is a complete idea. As always, spell check before you post.
1. April's movie Lord of the Flies.
2. A group of boys about 5 to 15 years old.
3. The boys, very excited about not having adults to tell them what to do.
4. At first, trying to create their own civilisation.
5. The conch, a large shell. Passed from boy to boy.
6. allowed to speak when they have the conch.
7. some boys are kind, some are greedy and selfish
8. bullies making fun of piggy even though he is the smartest of all the boys.
9. Some of the boys decide to follow Ralph, some follow Jack.
10. basically Ralph's gang and Jack's gang.
11. Obviously out of control when one boy dies.
12. At first, they boys are sure they will be rescued.
13. several weeks later without a rescue.
14. an incredible amount of violence from a group of very ordinary boys.
15. What might the writer, William Golding, be trying to say about human nature?
Monday, March 8, 2010
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